Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Betrayal...Haiku



 



Endearment is Love
Collating desire with Love is like
Deceiving own feelings





 


               
 Love is devotion
None without Commitment
 Betrayal is imminent

 







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19 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanMay 21, 2013 at 1:45 PM

    A very moving pairing of haiku!

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  2. UnknownMay 21, 2013 at 1:49 PM

    Wow Tejinder.Both Haiku are full of emotions I loved both of them.

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  3. AnonymousMay 21, 2013 at 4:00 PM

    Great haiku, very powerful, very vivid

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  4. Reading PleasureMay 21, 2013 at 4:18 PM

    Wonderfully done

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  5. rallentandaMay 21, 2013 at 8:24 PM

    Liked the second one and the illustration.

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  6. ReshmaMay 21, 2013 at 10:33 PM

    Powerful takes both of them...

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  7. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 3:05 AM

    Very wise words x beautifully expressed

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  8. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 11:50 AM

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  9. Richa SinghMay 22, 2013 at 6:41 PM

    Pained words which create a furore in your mind for long...

    Richa

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 23, 2013 at 9:02 AM

      Thanks a lot.....Pain it self create furore in the mind.
      Regards

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  10. KISLAYA GOPALMay 23, 2013 at 12:23 AM

    Loved your take,esp the second one.

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