Friday, May 10, 2013

STORY......Haiku



Just say Yes
Let us be together forever
Lets write Epopee 







 
                                                                                                  



Eyes tell stories
Sunrise sunset winter or summer
cant hide Anguish.






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19 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureMay 10, 2013 at 4:30 PM

    Powerful set

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  2. AnonymousMay 10, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    The first one so moving and the second so true. I think my face will reveal me soon enough

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  3. UnknownMay 10, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    Awesome !! very poignant.

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 10, 2013 at 6:17 PM

      Thanks Man....I am honored You liked it.
      Regards and Thanks a lot

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  4. WabiSabiMay 10, 2013 at 5:27 PM

    And hopefully, one can't hide joy either! Trembling

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 10, 2013 at 6:18 PM

      Indeed that what Sunrise says....Sunrise in life brings sparkles in the eyes.
      Regards.

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  5. Amrit SinhaMay 11, 2013 at 1:22 AM

    Eyes do tell different stories ... very beautiful duo !!!

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 11, 2013 at 10:31 AM

      Thanks a lot
      Indeed Eyes cant not hide pain...
      Regards

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  6. Maggie GraceMay 11, 2013 at 6:36 AM

    Intense and lovely.

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  7. AnonymousMay 11, 2013 at 11:24 PM

    Together forever. A lovely sentiment.

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  8. KISLAYA GOPALMay 12, 2013 at 5:06 PM

    Thats thoughtful, loved the use of epopee in the haiku...!

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 12, 2013 at 9:30 PM

      Thanks Kislaya.
      I am big fan of ur blogs.
      Regards

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    2. KISLAYA GOPALMay 13, 2013 at 11:46 AM

      Thanx for the compliments Tejinder, I am humbled and elated!
      Your blog is just as beautiful!! :)

      Regards.

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  9. Ramesh SoodMay 12, 2013 at 11:12 PM

    I liked the second one more and the way you have weaved it for all the seasons of life....Happy to be here..
    Changaa Lageyaa...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

    RS

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    1. Tejinder KaurMay 13, 2013 at 9:40 AM

      Thanks a lot.
      Meinu vee bahut chngaa Lageyaa ki App ji nu Changaa lagya :)
      Regards.

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  10. ReshmaMay 16, 2013 at 3:38 AM

    Eyes speak the truth always...

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